RTomens, 2025 |
'Decide what your poem is about'
RTomens, 2025 |
How To Write Poetry 1, RTomens, 2025 |
Are the drawn lines too thick? Do they overwhelm the typing?
I started a series called How To Write Poetry, based on the AI answer from a Google search. Perhaps I'll make enough of them to create a book. Imagining having done that, I then like to imagine some poor soul buying the book thinking they will learn how to write poetry. As long as they didn't buy it directly from me, otherwise they'd want their money back.
I'm not saying it's impossible for a How To text on writing poetry to succeed in helping to create the next ------ ------ (insert a great poet) but what does that even matter so long as whoever starts writing enjoys it? Don't be a snob! As long as I don't have to read the results...
How To Write Visual Poetry? Perhaps I should have asked that - damn! You can. See what 'it' says. 'It' knowing everything. AI can write Visual Poetry, I'm sure. Hold on, isn't half the fancy digital Text Art I see on X written by some kind of programming anyway? You know, the whizzy, pulsating, shimmering stuff you see. I blame Kenneth Goldsmith.
So I printed part of the answer on paper that had already been treated then proceeded to type, first the vertical bank of lines running through it, then the double-typed angular lines and some wavy lines at the bottom. It wasn't enough.
That noise you heard was me thinking (sounds like the rusty cogs of a knackered machine slowly turning).
Pens! Yes, grab a pen and draw - that's what it needs. I picked out the Pentel N850 permanent marker and started. Minutes later I thought 'Fuck, that's too thick!'. But having started, what could I do? Abandon it? I very rarely abandon work. Carry on. Use some red. It was starting to look a right mess.
Help!
There's no-one to help you but yourself!
Spaces filled in on the right-hand side...yes...leaving holes through which some type is visible; I'm sure you noticed.
How's it looking? Unusually, I couldn't tell. Is it total crap? OK? Good?
Finally, black down the left-hand side to frame the typed section.
Put it to one side.
Get on with important stuff, such as listening to Venom...
TTFN
Who's To Judge?, RTomens, 2025 |
Twenty years ago, when it was released, I was initiated into the other side of Ennio Morricone courtesy of the compilation, Crime And Dissonance. Previous to that, like many, I only knew his classic spag Western soundtracks. That's what he'll be remembered for more than anything else. Naturally. Squint Eastwood's sharp shooting Man With No Name was bound to continue reaching a wider audience than the many Italian horror and crime films bearing the maestro's sonic touch. Crime And Dissonance covers all the ground Morricone would explore, much of it genre-twisting, from modern classical to 'jazzy', 'avant-garde', even groovy Pop moods. Essential.
RTomens, 2024 |
There's a carnival in town - something wicked this way comes? - it's filmed by Béla Tarr, scripted by Tristan Tzara and László Krasznahorkai and features mobile sculptures by Eduardo Paolozzi and Jean Tinguely with music by Bram Bosteels (Kaboom Karavan) and guests, Bart Maris (trumpet), Raphael de Cock (igir, jadagan and uillean pipes) and Stefaan Smagghe (violin and sarangi). Let the Fiasko! begin! Acts include a a hologram of Tom Waits playing the swordfishtrombone, the recreation of a New Orleans voodoo ritual by dancing skeletons and a Charles Mingus impersonator doing a table dance whilst cutting up Free Jazz records on three decks. Voices from the dead played at half-speed are piped through speakers all around the ground. It's fantastic, terrifying, funny, charming, mysterious...and very much worth a visit.
RTomens, 2024 |
There's somethin' happenin' here...what it is ain't exactly clear...
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'who is robin tomens?'
Robin Tomens is an author, music enthusiast, and blogger known for his work related to jazz music and record collecting. He has written books such as "Waltz in Time," which explore various aspects of music and culture. Additionally, Robin Tomens runs a blog called "Inconstant Sol," where he shares insights and reviews about jazz albums, including rare and obscure recordings, often delving into their historical context and significance. His contributions have made him a respected figure among jazz aficionados and collectors.'
A friend sent me the above, created by ChatGPT. I don't fear AI. It made me laugh. People assume fear drives a dislike of AI, as if those of us yet to be enthralled by it cower at the prospect of it taking over. Future scenario: AI is used to infiltrate the military industrial complex to such a degree that those controlling input can no longer stop the results, or alter them. AI creates wars which destroy the world. Somebody must have written that as fiction, surely.
How ChatGPT describes me is wrong anyway. Where does it get its false information? It names a book I haven't written and a blog I never wrote. I am certainly not 'a respected figure among jazz aficionados and collectors', despite having written this. More likely, because I wrote that.
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Ten years after my book was published, Demdike Stare released Tryptych. I mention it only because there's a Demdike Stare revival gathering pace...in my room...just because they came to mind, for some unknown reason...so I played Tryptych and was surprised at how good it still sounded...almost as good as when Sean Canty and Miles Whittaker seemed to rule the kingdom of 'hauntology'...they were so hip (ugh)...Mancunians from the murky North...a post-industrial landscape littered with the ruins of factories, crumpled pylons, rusting power generators...rubble...constant rain feeding giant weeds that burst through pavement cracks to thread themselves through smashed windows towards light that's never quite strong enough...in the new garden of evil...
They wouldn't thank me for suggesting they're finished. They're not. In January this year they released Sustain: FForward, a 'mixtape' merging all manner of beats and samples. But for my money, it's not as impressive as their Testpressing series, 2013 to 2015.
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Talking of rampant foliage in the post-industrial world...the Drowned World, whilst walking around Chatham Docks this week I came across this...
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RTomens, 2023 |
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It's the time of year people compile lists of their favourite books/films/albums of 2023, isn't it? Yes, I would...I might...if I had a memory left. Besides, my Favourite Books of 2023 would be a very short list. Ditto Film. Etc. So, thank god for Spotify because it can remember my musical year for me. or rather, it logs it. It knows everything about my listening habits. Slightly disturbing...slightly...in a way...the thought it 'it' keeping track...you know, the way technology does...
So because you're just dying to know, here's what I listened to and for how long and who etc...
Is this a long time spent listening to music?
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RTomens, 2023 |
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Oh, you're back! I wondered where you'd been. Me? I've been doing loads of things, most of them pertaining to the business of living, by which I mean breathing (first and foremost), eating and sleeping. What? You think I set my sights pretty low? Maybe, but I've achieved more than Joe Strummer, who would have been 71 today if he hadn't died 21 years ago, aged 50. OK, I've only achieved more in terms of time, but did he achieve more than me in actual achievement? I don't know. What is 'more'? Just because he lead a band that became famous does that make his achievement greater than anything I've done?
The Clash were my favourite band 46 years ago (46! Christ!). I saw them 'live' at Friars, Aylesbury, twice. Back then there were 'No Elvis, Beatles or The Rolling Stones', as Strummer declared on 1977. Why? Because Punk killed them. It didn't literally kill Elvis that year. Preliminary autopsy findings determined Presley's death was the result of a "cardiac arrhythmia", which is ironic because he made his career out of rhythm (of the rock 'n' roll and hip gyratory varieties). He was only 42, but overweight and full of opiates Dilaudid, Percodan, Demerol and codeine, as well as Quaaludes.
Strummer died of a heart attack caused by an undiagnosed congenital heart defect. I can still see him 'singing' amidst a torrent of saliva from fans, as disgusting as that sounds, so I doubt that was good for him. Meanwhile, today, The Rolling Stones are still going! And The Beatles will go on forever in our hearts, won't they? Perhaps The Clash will also be eternal, their torch carried by each new generation that discovers them. Yes, I'm sure. I, however, stopped loving them so much a few years after they split up and rarely play them, these days.
Every generation claims to 'have seen the best bands'. The claim gets weaker as time passes, though. Is it really such a great claim to have seen Oasis, Blur or Pulp 'live'? For those adoring fans who were there, yes, I suppose it is. A stronger claim, though, would be to have seen Elvis in his prime, surely. What about The Beatles? Or James Brown in the 60s. The Doors? Hendrix? Etc, you know the roll call of 'legends'. Yes, each generation has its own legends, but how do they compare to the forerunners, the mould-breakers and makers? Those who forged the template used by thousands of artists to come?
So I turn my gaze towards today. I look around, admittedly incapable of properly assessing 'the scene' because my ear is far from 'the ground'; instead it's content to be far away absorbing all that has passed, musically, since the dawn of Jazz...through the Blues, Rock 'n' Roll, Electronic music, Soul, Rock, Reggae, Funk, Punk/New Wave/No Wave (I wish I'd never started this list) and all points connected and disconnected. Still, I like to think that somewhere in sweaty basements bands are doing something new and interesting, followed by youths who dress in new and interesting ways. I see no sign of them on the streets, though.
For now, let us go then you and I...back to 1974 and Peter Gabriel's performance during which, to illustrate the lyric, he reappears in a terrifying old man mask. I doubt there's anyone today who's as committed to conjuring up such a fascinating and disturbing theatrical vision. A mere two or three years later, Punk would banish such Prog eccentricities, but today this level of creative imagination would be welcomed.
I've been waiting here for so long / And all this time has passed me by / It doesn't seem to matter now / You stand there with your fixed expression / Casting doubt on all I have to say.
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RTomens, 2023 |
This a page from an altered book that I've just completed. I'm in the process of scanning every page and when that's done I'll be providing the link here on the blog.
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Unusually, my TBR pile is promising enough to prevent me from being tempted to buy another novel for a while.
That's a lie, the kind us book-lovers tell ourselves. 'I've got enough to be going on with.' - yeah, right.
On the bus this morning, heading for shops containing books that I will not buy, I had the mad idea of reading everything by Agatha Christie. God know where it came from, except possibly the fact that I'm currently reading a crime novel, although that's were the similarity ends. I doubt that one line in Tom Rob Smith's Child 44 is similar to anything written by Christie, but then again, I may be wrong.
'That's not what you normally read,' said a friend, spotting the book by my bed. True, it isn't. I likened it to him watching a Tom Cruise action film as opposed to his normal 'tasteful' fare of film noir, Westerns, cult classic etc. I fancied a change, you know? Not that I'm a 'highbrow' reader. The last one I finished was Shane by Jack Schaefer and a more plainly written novel you could not find, which does nothing to lessen the effect of the story.
Meanwhile, it was the mid-20th century Russian setting of Child 44 which made me interested, that and the fact that it was in a £2 sale. It's back and inner front pages are packed with positive blurb, although one almost had the opposite effect to the one desired. 'A superior commercial thriller' Telegraph' it reads. 'Commercial'? Me, engaging in 'commercial' culture? Surely not? I shun commerciality! I'm...I'm above anything that smacks of being 'commercial'!
So, OK. I get to around page 70 and, being underwhelmed, contemplate giving it the elbow. I was wasting my time on a 'commercial' thriller, wasn't I? But then the true nature of an evil regime's idea of 'justice' begins to be explored and described more deeply and Smith does a good job of depicting the terror of being convicted in the name of communism. Suffice to say, I'm hooked.
Coincidentally, last week I discovered, The Plastic People of the Universe, a band operating underground (where else?) in communist Czechoslovakia. As is often the case, severe social constraints conspire to spark wild creations in the name of free expression and The Plastic people were very 'free'. I loosely liken their range of style to Trout Mask-era Beefheart but in case that puts you off, give them a listen anyway.
For now, ta-ta.
RTomens, 2023 |
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RTomens, 2023 |
Ad for the Container Corporation of America, 1956. Artwork by Ben Shahn. |
RTomens, 2023 |
Singalong now...'I never felt better in my li-i-fe' - thanks Mark...
As I explained elsewhere, it's not that I feel great, but the Winter blues are alleviated somewhat by the appearance in The Cave of Iceland's luxury all-butter mince pies, which can only be bought in December because to have them sooner would risk over-familiarity with their delicious pastry and fruity filling to the point where, come Xmas, they would be taken for granted...rendered almost meaningless and on the day that the mince pie become meaningless, well, an existential crisis is born!
Speaking of existence and the meaning of life, I recently watched Julien Temple's The Ecstasy of Wilko Johnson, in which Wilko ponders such things, as you would when diagnosed with an inoperable (supposedly) cancer. Temple includes his trademark film clips of both real life and cinematic, all blending in perfectly with the content. Wilko's literary knowledge is also used to great effect. It's a wonderful film. I saw Dr Feelgood at Friars in 1975. Their energy and attitude marked them out as something very different from either the standard Pub Rock outfit or, obviously, Prog noodling. Unbeknownst to us, we were watching the seeds of a fierce new world being sown; to be reaped by Rotten and co a year later.
From (the meaning of) Life, the Universe and Everything to the musical world's greatest cosmic voyager. An album of previously unreleased Sun Ra is due on December 16th. Prophet was recorded in a single day in August 1986 and features Him playing the Prophet VS synthesizer, a new instrument at the time. Not that Ra needed new technology to present advanced messages from the outer limits of imagination and sound - he was travelling the spaceways decades ago. Here's a taster from the album, complete with appropriately spaced-out visuals...
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